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The story's about... I'd say a third complete, with the dialogue mostly done. I'm still fleshing out Jack's confrontation with Judy, and have to come up with two character names. Also, please note that some parts of 'Snippets' are subject to change over time. Other than that, here's the FIRST snippet of "Zootopia AU: Predation".
The buck stood in the center of the room - hardened gaze sweeping from one side of the flat to the other - never once making a sound; Judy, despite her sharpened hearing, couldn't even pick up on the controlled, miniscule steps he took as he shifted to gain a better vantage.
In the dark of her apartment - tense as it was from the possible threat - all she could truly see was the cold outline of his drawn gun in one paw, and the faintest glimmer of the knife he clutched in the other. What struck her the most was the poise that he took, focus forward and ears somehow breathing in the silence as he was in tuned to every hidden noise.
After a moment - one where her heart stilled and her voice and thoughts died to become one with the ever encroaching abyss - Jack finally let his arms slowly fall to his side. She could tell he was still guarded, but it was clearly visible that things were different; something in the way he looked at her - amber eyes sharpened towards the doorway that shone with a hidden level of danger that Judy could only fathom came with his name.
It was only when he didn't say a word or move, that she figured the coast was clear. Taking one step through the threshold of the door - which felt like a leap over a chasm - she entered her home.
"Judy, I'm gonna level with you here. What happened in the last few hours... it's not good."
His voice, though calm and seemingly patient amidst the sea of rage she knew was behind it, shook her to her core. From one of her previous conversations with the buck, she knew that he had a side of him that the world never saw, but now that she was here to see it...
The way his eyes never left her was unsettling to say the least. And if that wasn't enough, what left his mouth next, made her tremble. "The fact that you're still alive and standing is what's wrong," he paused, taking a moment to turn his head to gaze out of the window. The eerie glow of grey and blue defined his features even more so than she could have tried to describe. "Someone knew about you and Nick," said Jack, barely tilting his head to catch her out of the corner of his eye. "and now... now you're both being targeted."
The buck stood in the center of the room - hardened gaze sweeping from one side of the flat to the other - never once making a sound; Judy, despite her sharpened hearing, couldn't even pick up on the controlled, miniscule steps he took as he shifted to gain a better vantage.
In the dark of her apartment - tense as it was from the possible threat - all she could truly see was the cold outline of his drawn gun in one paw, and the faintest glimmer of the knife he clutched in the other. What struck her the most was the poise that he took, focus forward and ears somehow breathing in the silence as he was in tuned to every hidden noise.
After a moment - one where her heart stilled and her voice and thoughts died to become one with the ever encroaching abyss - Jack finally let his arms slowly fall to his side. She could tell he was still guarded, but it was clearly visible that things were different; something in the way he looked at her - amber eyes sharpened towards the doorway that shone with a hidden level of danger that Judy could only fathom came with his name.
It was only when he didn't say a word or move, that she figured the coast was clear. Taking one step through the threshold of the door - which felt like a leap over a chasm - she entered her home.
"Judy, I'm gonna level with you here. What happened in the last few hours... it's not good."
His voice, though calm and seemingly patient amidst the sea of rage she knew was behind it, shook her to her core. From one of her previous conversations with the buck, she knew that he had a side of him that the world never saw, but now that she was here to see it...
The way his eyes never left her was unsettling to say the least. And if that wasn't enough, what left his mouth next, made her tremble. "The fact that you're still alive and standing is what's wrong," he paused, taking a moment to turn his head to gaze out of the window. The eerie glow of grey and blue defined his features even more so than she could have tried to describe. "Someone knew about you and Nick," said Jack, barely tilting his head to catch her out of the corner of his eye. "and now... now you're both being targeted."
Snippet (In Our Dreams #17)
Hey all. ^^
Sorry about the delays and all, but I'm back with another I.O.D. snippet!
It's a bit short, but the chapter, along with the next three chapters of Zootopia AU: Predation, are being worked on at the same time and should be out this weekend.
As I mentioned before, this chapter will be from Jack's perspective. I had originally thought to do this from Sherif Chamby's, but it didn't work right for the material. Though you'll definitely see him a lot in the background. ;)
Thanks again to Koraru-san (https://www.deviantart.com/koraru-san) and JadeHopps (https://www.deviantart.com/jadehopps) for their OC's as cameo's in the story. And the chapter after this will feature!
Well, I can't say, but Pumpkin SPICE,
Birthday thank you's and updates
Hey all, DLW here. ^_^
First off, I wanted to thank everyone that wished me a happy birthday. It's been a great day and I appreciate all the well wishes and happy ones. :D
As well, I hope you're all enjoying the month of July. ;)
Next, I wanted to say that a few fics that I've been working on are coming back and a few more are being worked on.
Not truly "adding another hundred fics", but finishing the ones that are on my plate currently.
First up, you guessed it, more "In Our Dreams"!
It's about time that I finished the current chapter and this one and the next should be out in about a week or so.
Following that, the first chapter of P
Snippet (In Our Dreams #16)
Hey all. ^^
I'm back with another I.O.D. snippet!
Anyone wondering what Juniper was up to? Well, look no further! Well, maybe do? Some sisters are gonna get what's comin' to them. ;)
Thanks again to Koraru-san (https://www.deviantart.com/koraru-san) and JadeHopps (https://www.deviantart.com/jadehopps) for their OC's as cameo's in the story.
If you'd like to see your OC in an awesome Zootopia High School AU, please let me know. I'll see how I can fit them in,
Also! Ideas are welcome! I have a ton from reviews, comments and notes. So let me know if you have anything you'd like to see.
www.fanfiction.net/s/12470674/…
archiveofourown.org/works/1077…
In Our Dreams (Entwined)
Until then, here's the snip
Snippet (In Our Dreams #15)
Hey all. ^^
Just wanted to do another quick IOD snippet!
The next chapter is well on its way like a bushel of fresh blueberries. ^^
... okay, not a good phrase, but still. XD
Thanks again to Koraru-san (https://www.deviantart.com/koraru-san) and JadeHopps (https://www.deviantart.com/jadehopps) for their OC's as cameo's in the story.
If you'd like to see your OC in an awesome Zootopia High School AU, please let me know. I'll see how I can fit them in,
www.fanfiction.net/s/12470674/…
archiveofourown.org/works/1077…
In Our Dreams (Entwined)
Until then, here's the snippet for In Our Dreams.
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Judy really didn't know what to say about her sister's plan, but she
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I'm guessing this snippet happens in the future in the story.